请网友们帮我评一下我写的作文

1. 请网友们帮我评一下我写的作文

1．文章的语言很流畅，也写出了老师的感受。
2.你是老师的知音，希望我们共同切磋，在文学的百花园中采撷芬芳的一束。
3．对不起，这一段老师没有读明白，你愿意为老师再解释一下吗？谢谢你。
4．你的字迹工整，书写很优美,老师要向你学习。文章选材如果再新颖些，肯定会与书写交相辉映。你认为呢？
5．太棒了！你的文章，再现了东北人的憨直爽朗，使读者顿感神清气爽。语言流畅至极，通感运用尤为巧妙。你的笔锋具有征服力和感染力。努力，再创辉煌！

2. 作文，按要求写。急急急。给好评

Good morning, dear judges!
My name is Joyce. Today I will give a speech about How To Be A Happy Kid.
Everyone deserves to have a happy childhood. We all know, life isn’t
easy all the time, even for children.
One time I didn’t do well on a math test. It was the first time for me
to get such a low mark. I felt miserable about it. When I got home, without
saying a single word to my parents, I rushed into my own room. I sat down
in front of my piano. Unconsciously, music came out from my fingers. I was
lost in the beauty of the music. My heart flew with the song in the air. The
piano music was just like a wise old man consoling me with soft words. After
playing the music, I felt very calm and happy.
We shouldn’t lack for joy in life. The key is to find ways
to be happy. For me, playing the piano helps me find the road back to
happiness. For other children, they might find it other ways, like by
singing, dancing, playing soccer or helping people. But for all of
us, it should come from knowing our parents love us.
I am a child. Children shouldn’t worry about anything. I wish every
kid is a happy kid.